Train Man/Densha Otoko Comparison

The Train Man story is a modern romantic fairy tale. (“Densha otoko” means, unsurprisingly, “train man”.) It has captured the imagination of readers to the extent of inspiring multiple manga versions, as well as a novel, a movie, and a TV show.

The story is simple: A geek on a train aids a girl being hassled by a drunk. He likes her, so he asks for help impressing her on a message board. Thanks to the advice, the two get together. It’s a classic structure, updated through the use of the internet for help instead of, say, a newspaper column.

Train Man: A Shojo Manga cover
Train Man: A Shojo Manga
Buy this book

Since it’s a single volume, I’ll start with Del Rey Manga’s edition. It’s by Machiko Ocha (original story by Hitori Nakano), adapted by Makoto Yukon, and subtitled “A Shojo Manga” to help distinguish its approach.

It opens with an introduction to both the fanboy and the message board. He’s drawn cutely, with big eyes and too-long hair, and his love of anime fills the void caused by his lack of experience with women. In this version, given the single-volume length, things happen relatively quickly, with fast introductions and setups.

He also meets his love interest before the key event when he falls asleep on her shoulder by accident and apologizes. That’s when he notices her beauty, plus he’s impressed by her love of reading. This gives her a little bit of personality to make her a character instead of a plot device, and it makes his motivation for trying to protect her a little more plausible, given his shyness.

After the event, she asks for his name and address in order to formally thank him. He’s so nonplussed by the whole thing that he posts the incident to the message board as soon as he gets home. She sends him a set of expensive Hermes teacups, and the boarders (drawn as random heads) encourage him to take the next step and call her.

Things progress from there, with a lunch date necessitating a makeover for him. He supposedly gets a good haircut, but I didn’t notice much difference, although the new outfit was an improvement. It’s kind of a hoot seeing a guy go through a typical primping sequence. His naivete and their awkwardness together on their first date are balanced by their ability to talk to each other. Although he keeps commenting on her beauty, she’s drawn as relatively normal for this genre.

As expected with a story that takes place so prominently online, there’s lots of captioned text for the messages. It’s something of a challenge visually to keep so much text interesting, but the artist manages it well, mainly through expressive head shots. (Also included are ASCII art images that were apparently part of the conversation; that’s a flashback!) I also enjoyed hearing Train Man’s internal monologue about his insecurities.

As events unfold, both he and the reader are learning basics about dating etiquette and how men and women communicate. That leads to him and the girl becoming friends first, necessitated also by the fact that she has a long-time boyfriend, although he mostly ignores her. The online commenters keep cheering Train Man on, and as he overcomes each new challenge, he’s gaining faith in himself, finding his own style and demonstrating more confidence at work. I found myself wondering how this would all end and thinking even if they don’t work out, the changes in him made it all worthwhile. There’s even kind of a graduation ceremony for him online to commemorate the change.

Densha Otoko cover
Densha Otoko
Buy this book

As is typical of Del Rey’s manga, there’s a short section of translation notes at the end that were particularly helpful with this story, plus an essay on the Train Man phenomenon in a broader cultural context. I can already tell that the other two series are going to have a hard time impressing me more than this single volume with its classic romantic approach.

The CMX version is three books by Wataru Watanabe, adaptation by Sheldon Drzka, of which only one has come out so far. Typical of current CMX books, it’s thinner than the others, due to the lighter weight paper. According to the classifications on the back cover, this version is positioned as a teen comedy, and the caricatured illustrations and scratchy style fit that approach.

We first meet Train Man doing a pratfall in Akihabara (translation: Geeksville) while trying to help a girl. He’s exaggeratedly shy, to the point of panic attacks, and subject to getting knocked around by people who don’t notice him. The girl in this version is doll-like. When we first see her, she’s unspeaking, and she looks about eight years old (but with breasts).

Given this take, it didn’t surprise me when his standing up to the drunk was drawn with speed lines and outbursts galore. Even with the artist’s attempts to insert drama, this version seems a lot more shallow. The online comments are boring, simple text boxes layered over each other, although more of the commenters are fleshed out as supporting characters. Between the over-the-top exaggeration and the lack of meaningful emotion, I wanted to give up halfway through. This volume ends with them meeting to begin their first date.

Train_Man Densha Otoko Book 1 cover
Train_Man Densha Otoko Book 1
Buy this book

The Viz version has two of three volumes released so far. The manga is by Hidenori Hara with adaptation by Mark Giambruno. It also takes a comedic approach, but it’s not as over-the-top, and the characters are more distinctively designed. (They’re less generic-looking than in either of the others.)

This edition opens with the train incident, throwing the reader directly into the event that starts everything. It’s more dramatic, but we lose the knowledge of how difficult this was for Train Man or how he feels or struggles internally. We’re no longer riding along with him; instead, we’re mere observers, put into the place of one of the message boarders. We also lose the explanation for the particular kinds of people (singles who’ve given up hope) who populate the message board, which removes another of the items that suggest just how much of a stretch this is for him.

The character designs and shading remind me of old Mad magazines for some reason. That’s not the only major difference: In this version, Train Man stands up to the drunk before his crush is even involved. In other stories, the drunk hits her (by accident or not), which finally drives him to action. Here, the drunk hits her after Train Man ducks under his swing, after he’s already stood up to him. If I wasn’t already familiar with this story, I’d find that less powerful and significant for the couple.

This version has more comedy (without descending into the younger-aimed slapstick of the CMX series), and the commenters seem like more of a team backing up Train Man, due to the way their posts are treated as almost real-time. I found the makeover most believable here, given the unique art style and the real effort to distinguish before and after. I did find the layout a little confusing at times, with small elements (like who pays what) seeming to contradict, but I suspect that this version is closest to the movie (which will be released on DVD here by Viz also). It ends on a cliffhanger, with the message boarders wondering why they haven’t yet heard about Train Man’s second date.

I don’t think anyone needs to read all of these — cute and charming as the story is, it does quickly become redundant — and of the three, I’d recommend the Del Rey. Not only does it play up the romance, it also is the best value, balancing all the elements well in one book. If I’d been able to read the entire Viz series first, though, that might have been my pick. (Complimentary copies for this review were provided by some of the publishers.)

18 Comments

  1. Definitely … definitely Train Man.

  2. Ed Sizemore

    Johanna, I love this story. Personal transformation stories always resonant deeply with me. Also this story offers a lot of hope to people in a fragmented post-industrial society. On one level, you have the shy guy finding the courage to chase after the girl he likes. This universal theme is told in a new modern guise. Its nice to be reminded we do have the power to change, if we have the courage to become someone new. On a second level, you have a group of divergent people who band together to form a community around helping this guy. This resonates with a lot of people because it reminds us that community is still possible. Community may not have its traditional shape and features, but we can still form true networks of support even in the internet age. Finally, you have the message that all people, even weirdest of the weird, are the same at heart and have the same desires of wanting to love and be loved. In an increasing fragmented society of divergent subcultures this message needs to be reiterated. When it seems like you have nothing in common with the person next to you, you need to be reminded that your human nature is the same regardless of all other differences. This idea gets lost in a lot of political and social discussion recently. In the end, Train Man is a great feel good story.

  3. What a great analysis, Ed!

  4. […] Johanna has been busy lately. At Comics Worth Reading, she compares the three versions of Train Man and reviews vol. 1 of Emma, vols. 1 and 2 of Mushashi #9, vol. 1 of Penguin Revolution, vol. 8 of Gals!, vol. 1 of ES (Eternal Sabbath), and the trade paperback edition of the manga-fied Sabrina the Teenage Witch. […]

  5. I’m actually debating with myself on whether to keep getting the Viz ones or not, since I now know how the story goes with the Del Rey one.

    I liked the Viz one a little better than the DR one because it showed more details about the dates themselves rather than just descriptions to the MB afterwards.

    It is a cute story, except in the CMX one which was lame, and I do want to try the movie when it comes out.

  6. Ed Sizemore

    James, I saw the movie at Otakon and I think it was great. I will be buying the DVD when it comes out.

  7. Amy Kim Ganter

    I’m so glad you reviewed all three versions! I was introduced to the Viz one, and fell in love with the drawings, pacing, and comedic timing (it reminds me of Lupin), not to mention the wonderful story. Since I’ve gotten it, it’s been passed around to all of my friends who come back to me gasping for the next volume! I didn’t know the Del Rey version was only one book. I’ll have to pick it up after the third Viz version comes out as I don’t want to spoil the story. I’d be curious to see the story unfold with more clear character motivation.

  8. Hee. There’s actually a FOURTH Densha Otoko manga that hasn’t been brought over yet. It’s by Douka Daisuke. A few chapters have been released in scanlation form, and it’s pretty decent.

    I was introduced to Densha through the TV series, which my school’s anime club has been showing. The TV Densha is short and capital-N-Nerdy and cute in a puppy kinda way. And the TV show puts a lot of effort into building up the people on the BBS as characters, with their own personalities and obsessions and problems.

    As geeks, we all fell in love with it. On the one hand, some of these characters are SO geeky that it sort of makes us look good by comparison, so it’s reassuring that way. On the other hand, extreme though he sometimes be… Densha’s one of ours. He’s FAMILY. We do see ourselves in his obsessions and his awkwardness and his shelves full of stuff. We recognize him as kin. So we are right in there, part of the community, cheering him on and groaning at the setbacks and shouting advice and telling that miltary fanboy in the fatigues to shut up about fashion advice and roaring with delight when the ASCII artist makes an appearance.

    When I read Del Rey’s shoujo version, I was personally kind of disappointed. Densha wasn’t as much of a geek any more. And the other geeks online seemed to have a drastically reduced presence. I missed that feeling of an online community, all the people with their personas and catch phrases and attitudes.

    The Douka manga version gave me more of what I wanted. We are introduced to the thread as it was, a place for men to bitch and moan about involuntary celibacy and indulge in a little schadenfreude when somebody has a particularly bad experience. We see Densha sloppily dressed and talking to his bishoujo figurine. We see the other characters reading Densha’s posts, experience it with them, see more characters get added as the thread changes focus, gains popularity and momentum. And I would say the art is the best of the four.

    I’m really hoping this version makes it over the Pacific eventually, but failing that, it looks like the Viz version might appeal to me most of the three currently available. Thanks!

  9. Whups, sorry, should have been DOUKE Daisuke. ^_^;

  10. The problem with bringing over the fourth is… who would put it out? The only major manga publisher without one of the titles is Tokyopop, and they seem to be cutting back on Japanese licenses. I wonder where I could see a sample of the art? It sounds interesting.

  11. You can download the first four chapters of the scanlation here (note, being an amateur job, the translation’s occasionally a little awkward). Unfortunately, four is all they have so far, and it’s been a while since the last update. I do realize that a North American license is unlikely, sadly. I may try to track this one down in its original Japanese and muddle through.

  12. […] Also in February, the Train Man: Densha Otoko DVD will be out from Viz. I’ve enjoyed the various manga series enough that this might be something to look for. […]

  13. […] so I’m not sure if it’s worthwhile; Johanna at Comics Worth Reading is going to be your source for sorting through the various versions of this […]

  14. […] of interest to a wide audience. For instance, I wanted to see this because I’d read the three translated manga versions, but my husband also was interested enough to watch it, although he doesn’t read much […]

  15. […] to Tranquility #2 keeps up with the promise of the first issue. I’m also signed up for Densha Otoko Book […]

  16. tks for the effort you put in here I appreciate it!

  17. […] series is the negative image of Train Man (Densha Otoko). In that manga, a male otaku falls in love with a normal girl. In order to build a relationship […]

  18. […] Imadoki (two classmates bond through gardening), Gakuen Prince (bullying by female classmates), and Train Man (internet commenters telling one of their own how to succeed with dating). I frequently knew what […]

Leave a Reply

Comments are closed.